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Arrival by AlexBroeckel Arrival by AlexBroeckel
High Quality Prints of my work FOR SALE here: [link]

personal Work.. i found an old sketch of an Hangar Interior and tried to make something out of it.. Tell me your opinions..

i need to practice to paint more loose.. i am always ending up too detailed with my personal work and then it takes too long too finsih and i am loosing interest and then i am rushing to an end.. lol.. i think you can see that.. :-?

**** it would be very cool to get some comments on the other pictures in my gallery, too*** -> [link]
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Given 2009-05-08
Arrival by *raybender combines a good perspective and well chosen details. The contrastful colors and the clean brushwork make this painting extraordinary. ( Suggested by ZuluSplitter and Featured by taenaron )

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Sanctum16 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Absolutely Astonishing I aspire to become a great artist like you 
graphoholic Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Tried to make something out of it?? Your work is awsome! // Chin
NachoTheTrekkie Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011
I can see how you didn't have the same level of attention at every point, as the top is blurry and sketchy while the distant background in the bottom seems to be detailed to the last pixel. I would have devoted the detail to the foreground while left the background somewhat blurry and sketchy.

Something else that greatly bothers me: is that huge cylinder hanging right on top of the landing pad? That would be Very counter intuitive, as a narrow, circular landing pad would be precisely for VTOL (Vertical Take Off and Landing) vehicles, which by definition require a clear overhead.
exocolumn Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
Awesome work!
Saeva-Musica Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Brilliant, as always.
nnq2603 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2010
In top it looks like closed interior but look at bottom, it opens and whole city below~
Blackjaxe Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010
I completely understand your statement on putting in too much detail, my personal work always ends up with me putting in to much detail and much like yourself I find it a increasingly difficult struggle to try and loosen up....none the less I really like your work Ray...... I've always liked sci-fi just never got a chance to do sucked into another realm of art, feel free to browse my gallery and leave a critique.

Joey1058 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This has a nice art deco feel to it.
BlackHeartBeloved Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Your work is so wonderful!!! I LOVE all of the detail!!! :D
PinkuKen Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010
You have very great gallery! I like ecpesially this one :) Too bad you don't have much pictures :< But I keep waiting!
a-thammasak Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
Fantastic Sci-Fi Image!!
joelosito Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very cool!
nmeoo Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2010
wow, nice! definitely professional grade work here! ^^
JericaWinters Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2010
Awesome gallery!!!!! :love:
UniversalKinase Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is some truly spectacular work! Great job.
somefatguy1 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010
i love this dude. im so jealous and amazed at the same time
NitWhit Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fantastic use of perspective.
IllOO Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010  Student Digital Artist
OmegaTexnos Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010
Reminds me of Doom III(Hangar Scene) I love the realistic details in it
iancjw Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Snake-Obsidian Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
amazing how you always create these atmospheres hehe, never seen one deviation of yours that i didn't like. especially the Vipers :D
Littlemisscheri Featured By Owner May 22, 2010
Very sharp and concise! I love it!!
Dun9000 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2010  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Well that's impressive.

Great job!
SID75 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
LOL! The same story about my works... Exactly as yours!!! :)
KAH-Graphics Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Hobbyist
iatemypencils Featured By Owner May 23, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
5* !
RhysGriffiths Featured By Owner May 21, 2009
wow your perspective is always spot on.. it looks amazing. can i ask how you go about your initial composition? do you draw using perspective lines and such, or use a 3D program? totally understand if you dont have the time to answer :)
AlexBroeckel Featured By Owner May 22, 2009
hejo.. check out this thread and scroll down for some pics of my process :) [link]
RhysGriffiths Featured By Owner May 23, 2009
cheers man :) thanks for the insight :D
mastertangenator Featured By Owner May 18, 2009
this is amazing! its so epic!
catealist Featured By Owner May 18, 2009
Hi,I think your painting is long did it take you to do this piece.Im a traditional painter and just beginning to try to paint digitally but Im not very good and tend to give up after a long do you spend on a finished piece???and how long did it take you to learn??
great to see you here..
AlexBroeckel Featured By Owner May 18, 2009
hi... i painting normally takes 2 to 3 days... this one was 2 days. some are longer, depending on details.
well, i am stell learning to paint, it never stops.. but so far . i am painting for 13 months now.
catealist Featured By Owner May 18, 2009
Thankyou for giving me that information,I appreciate it.
rhodeder Featured By Owner May 13, 2009
Is that a transport platform?
EnzuDes1gn Featured By Owner May 12, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
just brilliant
wolfinthehead Featured By Owner May 10, 2009
Hey, very very nice indeed! Another great work.
I like this one, as the futuristic setting and colour contrast are both very interesting - although the contrast might be a little too much so, as the picture doesn't exactly seem as linear as it might.

Still great, though.
TomBydand Featured By Owner May 9, 2009

now thats what i call good!
Darkumbrellas Featured By Owner May 9, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
God.... * no words *

I think it´s amazing!
stalker777 Featured By Owner May 9, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Not a pro user so cant do a critique critique.But i'll do one here instead ^_~.


First of all it somehow reminds me of Star Wars looking at it.The lightning is nicely done and goes excatly as its supposed to be.Then the size of the people near the ship are small compared to the one on the balcony upside which depicts realism and makes the deviant look much more creative.The jet looks amazing no doubt!.The pathway looks nice and your perspective is totally correct.
Now for the city.Yet again the city perspective is painted very well keeping the upper portion (hanger) in mind.The city lights look amazing and the city really is made beautiful with those and it even looks like a Future Tech City :)
So in conclusion you did a great job with the lightning and the perspective and other "common things to keep in mind" (like the city is going to be futuristic etc).
AlexBroeckel Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
thank you very much for this extensive critique! i really appreciate it! :)
stalker777 Featured By Owner May 9, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Your welcome ^_^
lorddarkwolf Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
freaking sweet!
AscendingJustice Featured By Owner May 8, 2009
ShyVampiress Featured By Owner May 8, 2009   Writer
It reminds me of the backup generator (I thiiiink that's what it was) in the movie Serenity. teehee- mixed with the Star Wars movie when. . . umm, they jump into the car. . . It was the one with a changelum I think (gee, I didn't know I even KNEW that XD)
vas-is-nus Featured By Owner May 8, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think the detail is amazing
Sedated-vulture Featured By Owner May 8, 2009
thats amazing!
Sino-Mustang Featured By Owner May 8, 2009
Very very cool!! :D
EmbrisionArts Featured By Owner May 8, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Absolutely fantastic! :clap:
hellwithin8024 Featured By Owner May 8, 2009
Simply Amazing. Just the kind of art that keeps me coming back for more. Looks like i'll be checking back more often =)
JonFreeman Featured By Owner May 8, 2009   Digital Artist
very impressive work. really digging the lighting and the perspective. ^_^
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